Monthly Archives: September 2009

I’m plowing through the book now, reading each line and editing on the fly. I know the story very well (having written and rewritten it so many times) but there is still plenty of opportunity for mistakes and inconsistencies. I … Continue reading →

I solved the problem concerning George’s young age. I made him a couple of years older. I’ll explain what happened. Basket Ball Player While writing the original draft, I thought I would show the maturing of George throughout the book. … Continue reading →

I have a problem. In my original draft, I decided that George Belt, the narrator, would have a girlfriend. It seemed like a good idea at the time. George was supposed to be at the end of his 7th year … Continue reading →

I beefed up the confrontation between Ivan and Stephens this morning. I previously had rushed to a conclusion of the scene, but I knew then that it would take more than one disagreement to send Stephens off. He’s unlikable but … Continue reading →